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Lets write a poem or a song together
I will write one line of a poem or a song and the next person has to write the next line and so on and so on. When it is finished we will then select a title. Remember if it's a song there must be a chorus. Let's limit each verse to no more than 6 lines and no less than 4 lines. If its a song the chorus should be at least 4 lines. The first line is:
You make my day so bright
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| November 1, 2006, 15:30 |
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
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| November 1, 2006, 15:31 |
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
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| November 1, 2006, 16:17 |
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azcapt
79 / male
phoenix, Arizona, US
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
when you whisper softly in my ear
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| November 1, 2006, 16:49 |
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lizonya
64 / couple
lake elsinore, California, US
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
when you whisper softly in my ear
the things you do to me...
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| November 1, 2006, 16:56 |
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Tungmeister
70 / male
Miller Beach, Indiana, US
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Re: Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
QUOTE (lizonya @ November 1, 2006, 16:56)You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
when you whisper softly in my ear
the things you do to me...
has made me stay with thee
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| November 1, 2006, 18:48 |
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
When you whisper softly in my ear
The things you do to me...
Has made me stay with thee
It feels so good with you
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| November 2, 2006, 10:33 |
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Re: Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
QUOTE (skrr6689 @ November 2, 2006, 10:33)You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
When you whisper softly in my ear
The things you do to me...
Has made me stay with thee
It feels so good with you
Our love flowing easily
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| November 7, 2006, 02:21 |
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
When you whisper softly in my ear
The things you do to me...
Has made me stay with thee
It feels so good with you
Our love flowing easily
This love is to share for us
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| November 10, 2006, 15:38 |
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Re: Lets write a poem or a song together
You make my day so bright
The sun can never compare
You take me to new heights
When you whisper softly in my ear
The things you do to me...
Has made me stay with thee
It feels so good with you
Our love flowing easily
This love is to share for us
Together without a fuss
Feelings are so intense
So much love commence
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