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PleasantNight
50 / female
Boston, Massachusetts, US
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Neat
Go read my new user submitted story!
I like it, but it is weird and you might not.
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| October 4, 2006, 09:30 |
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Re: Neat
Good literary work BC. Submit some more of your work.
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| October 4, 2006, 10:40 |
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Re: Re: Neat
QUOTE (nineforu @ October 4, 2006, 10:40)Good literary work BC. Submit some more of your work.
You mean PN?
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| October 4, 2006, 10:55 |
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Re: Neat
Yes I mean PN. I have BC on the brain today. Sorry PN.
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| October 4, 2006, 10:59 |
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Re: Neat
Good job!!!! I was actually thinking it was going to end differently, but good none the less!!!
F Lev 
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| October 4, 2006, 12:01 |
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PleasantNight
50 / female
Boston, Massachusetts, US
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Re: Neat
Not much in the "whack off" department, but I don't write "stroke" stories very often.
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| October 4, 2006, 12:53 |
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lizonya
64 / couple
lake elsinore, California, US
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Re: Neat
what story are you talking about...the bird poem?
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| October 4, 2006, 12:59 |
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Tungmeister
69 / male
Miller Beach, Indiana, US
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Re: Re: Neat
QUOTE (lizonya @ October 4, 2006, 12:59)what story are you talking about...the bird poem?
yeah PN, even went to ur profile, is it the bird poem?
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| October 4, 2006, 13:01 |
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Re: Neat
Up near the top of the page, the yellow bar just under the Webnaughty logo, click on "Communtity"....then "erotic stories"....then "user submitted".....you'll find PN's story there...
The title is..."George - The Problem"
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| October 4, 2006, 13:23 |
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Re: Neat
Awww hell, I'll just tinyurl it for you ...
http://tinyurl.com/zrjvx
Copy and paste that in your browser address bar and go directly to the story...
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| October 4, 2006, 13:28 |
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Re: Neat
Excellent! 
My attention span isn't up to much, but it kept me reading.
Loved the climax.
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| October 4, 2006, 13:43 |
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lizonya
64 / couple
lake elsinore, California, US
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Re: Neat
i loved it. really intriguing and you, missy, have a way with the words!!!!!!
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| October 4, 2006, 13:46 |
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Re: Neat
QUOTE (PleasantNight @ October 4, 2006, 09:30)Go read my new user submitted story!
I like it, but it is weird and you might not.
Some people write stories about what they have on their minds. I could easily picture you as Mrs Jenkins,,I would love to play George for you, but I doubt if you will be able to slip away from me and out of the room so easily. I thought the story was great.
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| October 4, 2006, 14:11 |
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Re: Neat
I'd almost guess you were good with words or something.
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| October 4, 2006, 18:07 |
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Re: Neat
It was good, enough to give me some sort of tingle.
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| October 4, 2006, 19:29 |
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Tungmeister
69 / male
Miller Beach, Indiana, US
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Re: Neat
Well written PN! I think it would make a great X-rated "Twilight Zone" if she stays there and turns the tables on him. 
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| October 4, 2006, 20:35 |
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Re: Neat
like it very much..ever thought of becoming a writer
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| October 4, 2006, 22:24 |
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Re: Neat
I enjoyed reading your story!!! I loved the twists and the creativity!!!! The more you keep writing these stories....., the more I will be using a towel under my  
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| October 5, 2006, 06:19 |
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pepper
56 / female
daytona, Florida, US
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Re: Neat
I liked it, great job, PN!!!!!!!
  
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| October 5, 2006, 07:05 |
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PleasantNight
50 / female
Boston, Massachusetts, US
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Re: Re: Neat
QUOTE (boredcountryboy @ October 4, 2006, 18:07)I'd almost guess you were good with words or something.
Dja think?
:emoticon:
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| October 11, 2006, 10:04 |
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