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wonderous
I know I'm not the brightest crayon in the box
nor the sharpest knife in the drawer
I do what I can and sometimes need a shove
I have times when I go loopy
just to put a smile on your face
and by mistake sometimes I might make you frown
I then sit and wonder what loopy thing I did
and go at it for ages until I know
Hoped you liked the package in the box
because surely I feel bad my fault or not
This might be cheesy to some of you, but one or another will understand... yeah yeah i know i was never big on writing poems, shut up. 
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| July 20, 2006, 21:57 |
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pepper
56 / female
daytona, Florida, US
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Re: wonderous
very good, Bc, I like it a lot!!
  
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| July 20, 2006, 22:06 |
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Re: wonderous
thanks 
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| July 20, 2006, 22:14 |
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funlovingpair
59 / couple
Frozen Tundra, Minnesota, US
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Re: wonderous
I like it. And yes i get what your saying.
I give you credit. i can't write i did one thing for pa but i thought it was stupid and never even showed him. still have it tucked away.
Ma
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| July 20, 2006, 22:15 |
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Re: wonderous
thanks, why not show it to him?? Or hey, maybe even save it for some special thing you remember that happened awhile back???
Otherwise.. keeping it tucked away is good too. LOL
Or this!! If you wanted to give it to him, tuck it somewhere, where you know they'll find it but unexpectedly. I love it like that.
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| July 20, 2006, 22:19 |
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azcapt
79 / male
phoenix, Arizona, US
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Re: wonderous
\\\GR8 job bc---its nice when you can just be yourself
and say what you mean. I understood it completely
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| July 21, 2006, 00:32 |
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Re: wonderous
I love it bc. You should write more. Always try to write and say what's in your heart. I often get inspired by others and also from personal experiences. I try to write down my thoughts as soon as I can before I forget them. One morning while shaving a great idea for a new song came to me and as soon as I finished shaving I went on the computer to write the song but I made the mistake of checking for messages on a chat line and ended up talking with someone for over an hour. By the time we finished talking I had forgotten my song idea. I kicked myself because I am sure that it would have been a good song too.
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| July 21, 2006, 14:27 |
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Re: onderous
Five *****'s for that one!!!
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| July 21, 2006, 14:52 |
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Re: wonderous
QUOTE (bikerchick69 @ July 20, 2006, 21:57)I know I'm not the brightest crayon in the box
nor the sharpest knife in the drawer
I do what I can and sometimes need a shove
I have times when I go loopy
just to put a smile on your face
and by mistake sometimes I might make you frown
I then sit and wonder what loopy thing I did
and go at it for ages until I know
Hoped you liked the package in the box
because surely I feel bad my fault or not
This might be cheesy to some of you, but one or another will understand... yeah yeah i know i was never big on writing poems, shut up.
I like the package in the box,and also would like to kinda nibble on the box
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| July 21, 2006, 15:54 |
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Re: wonderous
Thought it was nice.
IT''s good to see you relaxed enough to say what you think.  
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| July 21, 2006, 17:29 |
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Re: Re: wonderous
QUOTE (stayhard43756 @ July 21, 2006, 15:54) QUOTE (bikerchick69 @ July 20, 2006, 21:57)I know I'm not the brightest crayon in the box
nor the sharpest knife in the drawer
I do what I can and sometimes need a shove
I have times when I go loopy
just to put a smile on your face
and by mistake sometimes I might make you frown
I then sit and wonder what loopy thing I did
and go at it for ages until I know
Hoped you liked the package in the box
because surely I feel bad my fault or not
This might be cheesy to some of you, but one or another will understand... yeah yeah i know i was never big on writing poems, shut up.
I like the package in the box,and also would like to kinda nibble on the box
if you feel like nibbling on a piece of metal that holds mail... more power to ya! 
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| July 21, 2006, 18:01 |
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Re: wonderous
golden memories
in a box the same
smiles of the favored past
and promises of those that remain
thanks hun 
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| July 23, 2006, 11:06 |
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Re: wonderous
cool sonnet
what could i say i am touch
like box of chocolates
you never know what i'm gonna get
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| July 25, 2006, 05:09 |
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Re: Re: wonderous
QUOTE (boredcountryboy @ July 23, 2006, 11:06)golden memories
in a box the same
smiles of the favored past
and promises of those that remain
thanks hun
Regardless what goes, Smiles of the favored past it will be, always.
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| December 2, 2006, 05:02 |
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KINKYINTHEFALLS
57 / male
wild and wonderful, West Virginia, US
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Re: wonderous
I missed this one before but I must say it is very nice
BC
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| December 2, 2006, 12:43 |
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Re: Re: Re: wonderous
QUOTE (bikerchick69 @ December 2, 2006, 05:02) QUOTE (boredcountryboy @ July 23, 2006, 11:06)golden memories
in a box the same
smiles of the favored past
and promises of those that remain
thanks hun
Regardless what goes, Smiles of the favored past it will be, always.
Place me in your past
Your choice, i see, is clearly made
Sealing my fate with always
Just a memory soon to fade
Puncuating a week of torment
A comment left to be found
Leaving me to wonder
Knowing you're not around
My love appears not enough
To quench your whimsical thirst
I bid you fare well
With second rate verse.
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