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ok this one has a twist
Braking down the walls of defining silence. Can you see it? As tall as an eye of love, Building up with every second.with unseen love that lye's quietly watching. A tear falls out in it's dismay, as the ground gives way.Within this day the tears have turned, into a river flowing down the valleys trialling this word.As wide as this world is deep the eye of love crieys out it's dismay harder, as it watches the walls of defeating silence . As if a taunt ,the walls fall down, then grow wings as it hits the ground, flying back up just high as it was befor.This river has now turned into a ocean ....the one ocean, has turned into 7.Some cold and hard as the ice it revels, ,some worm still alive with the love it has.....Children of this world drink of the river because its of an unknowing sweet tear ..Flowing from the unknown loving eye. The adults take the salt from the sea, to use on there meats and such ...All the while, UN knowingly these creatures of this earth eat the salt and drink of the river. The river from witch the eye of love has made. As the children and adults grow wise with the love inside.They learn how to brake the walls. The walls of defying silence..................My question to all of us is this ......How many tears of love do we have left? Tears of love that teach us the way of life?Are we able to hold true to these teachings, from the tears of unfounded love?The teaching of the ways of life?Are we able to hold true to these tears????I am not just talking to, of, or for a person or pet i am also talking for the earth we reside in ....The unfounded tears hidden in the creases of the world......
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| March 18, 2006, 15:35 |
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Re: ok this one has a twist
very beautiful
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| March 18, 2006, 16:15 |
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naughtyandnasty
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blythe, California, US
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Re: ok this one has a twist
thanks 4 yours 
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| March 19, 2006, 01:29 |
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nykitten
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Pawling, New York, US
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