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Blood Thirsty
On a cool october night when the moon is full and there is a slight chill in the air , beware it's wacthing you. It prowels in the shadows of the night watching and waiting, it's hunger grows. Proweling in a rundown cemetery it waits for it's unsuspecting victim.As you walk through it feels like someone or something is wacthing you, following you. You hear leaves crunchy behind you ,you look back and nothing is there. Then you hear on the side of you , you look and nothing is there. A chill runs down your spine and you hear a faint noise that sounds like a growel. You turn to look in front of you and there it is standing there glaring at you with those yellow eyes, mouth open , white fangs .It comes closer , your petrafide , all of a sudden it leaps grasping your neck with it's fangs , clamping harder until you can't breath and a pool of blood on the ground . It stands there drinking the blood quenching it's thirst. It jaws braking bones and tearing flesh devouring it's prey. When it's finished there is nothing left but a stain of blood on the ground. It goes back into the shadows waiting for another time.
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March 18, 2006, 14:46 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
oohhh dam this just sent chills in the back of my neck good one .....I so love things that make me scared lol really good
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March 18, 2006, 15:39 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
TY
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March 18, 2006, 16:14 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
Nothing that 8 rounds of 00 buckshot won't handle !!!
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March 21, 2006, 13:26 |
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Re: Re: Blood Thirsty
QUOTE (Leviathan4u @ March 21, 2006, 13:26)Nothing that 8 rounds of 00 buckshot won't handle !!!
Hey o.k. ,
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March 21, 2006, 13:29 |
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tomboy6978
46 / male Florissant, Missouri, US
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Re: Blood Thirsty
remind me to rent a dracula or vampire movie on a halloween date
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March 21, 2006, 14:00 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
I'm keeping my mouth shut.... trying really hard, too.
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March 21, 2006, 15:02 |
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QUOTE (MoonHowler @ March 21, 2006, 15:02)I'm keeping my mouth shut.... trying really hard, too. Go ahaead, I post them to get peoples coments, Please.
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March 21, 2006, 15:09 |
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nykitten
54 / female Pawling, New York, US
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All I can say, is that your writing is superb! ....Not to mention very unique......
I enjoy reading them....Thanks for sharing!
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March 21, 2006, 15:14 |
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QUOTE (nykitten @ March 21, 2006, 15:14)All I can say, is that your writing is superb! ....Not to mention very unique......
I enjoy reading them....Thanks for sharing! Thank you nykitten.
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March 21, 2006, 15:28 |
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QUOTE (urs4pleasure @ March 21, 2006, 15:09) QUOTE (MoonHowler @ March 21, 2006, 15:02)I'm keeping my mouth shut.... trying really hard, too. Go ahaead, I post them to get peoples coments, Please.
Don't be lol
I agree with NYK.. you do write good. Just a sensitive subject with me.. I'll get over it
Keep up the good work
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March 21, 2006, 15:40 |
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QUOTE (MoonHowler @ March 21, 2006, 15:40) QUOTE (urs4pleasure @ March 21, 2006, 15:09) QUOTE (MoonHowler @ March 21, 2006, 15:02)I'm keeping my mouth shut.... trying really hard, too. Go ahaead, I post them to get peoples coments, Please.
Don't be lol
I agree with NYK.. you do write good. Just a sensitive subject with me.. I'll get over it
Keep up the good work Thank you moonhowler , and sorry to hear didn't mean to bring back memories.
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March 21, 2006, 16:28 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
i think she just doesn't like getting scared but that's ok we wont let the buggyman get her i have my 22 OT nothing can get past that
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March 23, 2006, 13:20 |
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Re: Blood Thirsty
It's not the boogeyman that scares me... it's certain people in this world! lol And don't worry about me, hun.. I'm protected by Smith & Wesson... Remington.... Winchester... Ruger... Colt... Glock.... And I know how to use each and every one of 'em
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March 23, 2006, 14:01 |
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QUOTE (MoonHowler @ March 23, 2006, 14:01)It's not the boogeyman that scares me... it's certain people in this world! lol And don't worry about me, hun.. I'm protected by Smith & Wesson... Remington.... Winchester... Ruger... Colt... Glock.... And I know how to use each and every one of 'em Sounds like you have your own personal arsenal.
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March 23, 2006, 17:33 |
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