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the hell poem
Day in through the night ....,time stood still.Into the depth of hell they both slipped,one slowly & quietly ,wanting nothing more then the hellish shadows of darkness & lonelyness to engulfing into a silent pit 12 feet under the harsh unforgiving ground.The other fell into this pit fast and hard with the power of sound so painfully loud it was able to brake every molecule that surounded him. in this hell they both fell .A spark ran across the eyes of the loudness questioning the quietness,A time started to proceed in a slow manner as they vented out a rage and lonlyness both could understand.the understanding started to blossom as a radiant beam burst through ,as night through out day pieces of this hellish world they where in for so long started to fly... into a unknown existence....looking up into each others the only thing that could be seen , is the radiant loving happiness engulfing both as nothing stould in the way of the light. 
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| March 13, 2006, 01:03 |
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hardrock1955
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McGaheysville, Virginia, US
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Re: the hell poem
very nice    
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| March 13, 2006, 01:06 |
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Re: the hell poem
Wow, your writings seem so real they send chills throughout me. Very nice
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| March 13, 2006, 11:26 |
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Re: Re: the hell poem
QUOTE (hardrock1955 @ March 13, 2006, 01:06)
thankyou hard rock
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| March 13, 2006, 14:46 |
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QUOTE (urs4pleasure @ March 13, 2006, 11:26)Wow, your writings seem so real they send chills throughout me. Very nice
just thoughts of expression that just recently ben released in an explosion of insertion thought of love?lust?happiness? right now .........   but i am glad you in joyed it thankyou
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bignasty
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Elko, Nevada, US
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QUOTE (naughtybutterfly @ March 13, 2006, 01:03)Day in through the night ....,time stood still.Into the depth of hell they both slipped,one slowly & quietly ,wanting nothing more then the hellish shadows of darkness & lonelyness to engulfing into a silent pit 12 feet under the harsh unforgiving ground.The other fell into this pit fast and hard with the power of sound so painfully loud it was able to brake every molecule that surounded him. in this hell they both fell .A spark ran across the eyes of the loudness questioning the quietness,A time started to proceed in a slow manner as they vented out a rage and lonlyness both could understand.the understanding started to blossom as a radiant beam burst through ,as night through out day pieces of this hellish world they where in for so long started to fly... into a unknown existence....looking up into each others the only thing that could be seen , is the radiant loving happiness engulfing both as nothing stould in the way of the light.
very very good ....i love it.....more i need more NB
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Re: the hell poem
I have more out there some where.
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