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ok just a ?
who wants me to do another poem I need at least 5 to think about doing a another so if you guys want to hear it then say something because I don't want to offend anyone
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March 5, 2006, 20:45 |
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Re: ok just a ?
share it.. if someone is offended that's their short coming, not yours.
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March 5, 2006, 21:03 |
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HAPPILYHORNY
54 / couple ALTOONA, Pennsylvania, US
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QUOTE (boredcountryboy @ March 5, 2006, 21:03)share it.. if someone is offended that's their short coming, not yours.
I AGREE COMPLETELY
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March 5, 2006, 21:10 |
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bignasty
53 / male Elko, Nevada, US
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GOT POEMS? JUST DO IT BECAUSE YOU LOVE IT ....THE POEM THAT YOU WRITE IS FOR YOU ....OTHERS READ IT TO CAPTURE AND SHARE IN YOUR FEELINGS....SO JUST POST IT
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March 5, 2006, 21:37 |
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yea lets hear it!!!!!!
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March 5, 2006, 21:39 |
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bignasty
53 / male Elko, Nevada, US
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P.S...... HOT...HOT..HOT PHOTOS NB...BY THE WAY IN THE OTHERS IS THAT YOUR PLAY TOY?
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March 5, 2006, 21:40 |
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Re: ok just a ?
lol ok now that i am back from church(i forgot that someone was picking me up )and i have 5 replies well ok 4 bn i am not counting you twice hear you go
Bounded in a world of un found love is easy to comprehend when you see it all around you.
Begging for the love that once was and hasn't ben since,, can be found again only in the love that you show through all you do.
When you scream and no one listen,When you whisper and no one hears, When you talk and no one understands.Stand closer to her and listen. Do you hear her hart beating towards you? Or is an look of uncertainty. Uncertain of the words, Words thrown her way. Half heartily through the laughter of hurtful play. Knowing her words of love,understanding and respect will not be taken seriously.
How I long for someone to hold under the stars and talk of nothing-ness laughing at the man in the moon ,playing with the candlestick.To grab a nothers hand and know it wont be pulled away for fear someone will see.
Under the secret life's of a non-exists half hazarded life of two people.
How can they not hear the sound of love screaming in each others ears, heart, eyes, and soul? Replacing it with the sound of now and then.
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March 6, 2006, 00:35 |
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that was great
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March 6, 2006, 00:39 |
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Re: ok just a ?
Hell yea girl the offended shouldn't be on this site anyways.
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March 6, 2006, 00:46 |
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funlovingpair
59 / couple Frozen Tundra, Minnesota, US
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That was beautifully done. I can tell it comes from the heart and soul. So with that said, just keep them coming.
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March 6, 2006, 02:28 |
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flatbed
59 / male elgin, Illinois, US
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that was excellent.
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March 6, 2006, 05:29 |
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BRAVO...
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March 6, 2006, 06:04 |
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Thankyou for all of your replays. Its just I have to be in the mood for them. I know of some that are copied, but as some have all ready seen, I do mine from the heart...sooo you all will have to come up with a topic if you want to hear any more. With all my love I will see you all later, and check on this one on a regular bases signed naughtybutterfly
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