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jadehunter
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Ipswich, Queensland, Australia
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Write the next paragraph!
Thought it might be fun to work together at writing an erotic story. Simply add a paragraph one at a time leaving it for someone else to add the next. If a paragraph is too long then a sentence is fine.
Feel free to make comments, just make sure you make it clear where your paragraph starts and finishes.
Here is the kick off-
Pete lay back into the comfy cafe chair as he sipped his excellently brewed coffee. He had become a regular there for six weeks, it was a refreshing improvement to the sour coffee at the coffee stand just outside his work. Even though it was a longer walk, he didn't mind. Besides they had a hot waitress who seemed to always find a way to serve him when he came in.
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| June 9, 2011, 19:56 |
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Re: Write the next paragraph!
might get better response in the writer's corner..carry on.
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| June 9, 2011, 20:18 |
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Re: Write the next paragraph!
Even now as she took another tables order Peter could see a hint of blue lace peek out from underneath her skirt, He could tell by the way she shook her hips when she walked, that this was intentional.
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| August 5, 2011, 06:48 |
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He had become aware of her flirtatious behavior in the past few weeks, but assumed she always carried herself that way. After all, she is providing a service for which she can be greatly rewarded with generous tips.
But as time passed, he noticed that it tended to be directed toward him more than the others.
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| September 9, 2011, 15:29 |
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Re: Write the next paragraph!
Pete visited that cafe everyday for the next month watching the beautiful waitress. one night he followed her to her appartment and murdered her... the end
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| December 4, 2011, 03:48 |
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Iwant2kssuallovr
62 / female
Bendover, Florida, US
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Re: Write the next paragraph!
He only thought she was dead. She recovered nicely at the hospital and afterward underwent plastic surgery. She became a very powerful and influential woman, and an advocate for crimes against womean. Can you guess who she is?
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| December 4, 2011, 04:01 |
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onehornee
64 / male
69'sDevine, Michigan, US
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Re: Write the next paragraph!
No but I'm gonna track down Pete And kick his ass, i had great plans for the waitress..now I have to stalk Pete ,Use My(Micky Spillane's) Mike Hammer mojo on him..To bad I don't still have my 67'mustang 
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| April 18, 2012, 11:56 |
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onehornee
64 / male
69'sDevine, Michigan, US
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Re: Re: Write the next paragraph!
QUOTE (Iwant2kssuallovr @ December 4, 2011, 04:01)He only thought she was dead. She recovered nicely at the hospital and afterward underwent plastic surgery. She became a very powerful and influential woman, and an advocate for crimes against womean. Can you guess who she is?
hey kiss who is the lady your refering to?
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| April 19, 2012, 17:45 |
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