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A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
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| October 15, 2010, 15:11 |
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
oh mmmmmmmmmmm take me, take me.
Seriously, (was I ever not serious?) I am sure you had to concentrate so hard on typing your story Jo, because I know that because you would have been so excited you would have been making typo after typo and either constantly correcting or else typing slowly to avoid them.
Meanwhile, your excitement would have been building and building as your story progressed from your imagination to the page.
Lovely word images had me undressing along with you, to be the excited and unnoticed (by you) voyeur in your tryst with that delicious sounding Texan.
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| October 15, 2010, 15:26 |
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
I need to visit that place!
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| October 15, 2010, 15:30 |
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
WE are here Freensleazy, and Josie  is about - somewhere - but I can't see her. Maybe she is in the back room with that singer dude. Or the sexy Texan 
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| October 15, 2010, 15:48 |
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
Free....It's you bar hon I expect you to visit
and yes I did have fun writing it
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| October 15, 2010, 16:48 |
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Re: Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
QUOTE (longtack54 @ October 15, 2010, 15:48)WE are here Freensleazy, and Josie is about - somewhere - but I can't see her. Maybe she is in the back room with that singer dude. Or the sexy Texan
Yeah, ya have to keep an eye on Josie, the Texan and that singer dude. Theyre a bit rowdy
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| October 15, 2010, 16:55 |
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Re: Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
QUOTE (Josie34 @ October 15, 2010, 16:48)Free....It's you bar hon I expect you to visit
and yes I did have fun writing it
Well, I beg to differ. Its ALL OF OURs bar. I just stock it! 
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| October 15, 2010, 16:57 |
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Re: Re: Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
QUOTE (freensleazy @ October 15, 2010, 16:55) QUOTE (longtack54 @ October 15, 2010, 15:48)WE are here Freensleazy, and Josie is about - somewhere - but I can't see her. Maybe she is in the back room with that singer dude. Or the sexy Texan
Yeah, ya have to keep an eye on Josie, the Texan and that singer dude. Theyre a bit rowdy
Given a chance they really would be!. Couldn't resist doing the next chapter though (someone may slap me over this one, but, I am over the ocean lol)
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| October 15, 2010, 17:21 |
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JenTX
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
Oh yeah, I'm opening a bar. Have to after this. Ahhh, Love it.
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| October 15, 2010, 18:47 |
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Dutsji
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Ergens, Netherlands
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Re: A humble submission in gratitude to all my friends
Magical with words 
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| October 16, 2010, 06:22 |
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