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GG317
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Bowl of Granola, Massachusetts, US
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Please...a little feedback needed...
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| February 23, 2010, 15:36 |
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Re: Please...a little feedback needed...
Dear, you are a smart and definitly very imaginative man. (And I love your humor, by the way)
If I read your stories, I would want them to come from your mind and your instincts, cuz that would make it a pure GG creation.
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| February 23, 2010, 16:38 |
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Re: Please...a little feedback needed...
You may have only written a little bit, but i was getting into it, so thats a good thing. 
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| February 23, 2010, 16:53 |
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Re: Please...a little feedback needed...
NO NEED TO ELABORATE!! 
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| February 24, 2010, 03:07 |
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Re: Please...a little feedback needed...
sounds like you've got a good start man just keep it up. your other storys rocked you dont need any help
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| February 24, 2010, 03:16 |
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GG317
60 / male
Bowl of Granola, Massachusetts, US
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Re: Please...a little feedback needed...
That excerpt actually comes from the middle of page four. It was taken about a paragraph into it where I'm writting from one of the woman's points of view. Eventually, I'll revert back to the other guys, before ending with the the last girls. It's taking off kind of, but slowly. I'm right around page six. (I did say novel,didn't I?...)(lol)... 
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| February 24, 2010, 03:27 |
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