EugeneOregon paintes a beaftiful picture in his story "The Lake"

My new story is posted.. read it and comment or die!

Well???? If you don't write one, at least read a few of them and tell us what you think!!!

OOOOOhhh yes!!! Will this be one of the many "ADVENTURES OF POTMAN"???

Well, jump on in and start writing....by the way, Kbateman does the editing of the stories, she'll paragraph it, etc... because even though you have it formatted, once you submit, it turns into one big ass paragraph for some reason...

Oh don't you worry about Kbateman, I doubt she was really even offended by the sandwich thing, making you sweat it a little is just the first phase of the "whipped puppy" initiation....

  QUOTE (Chazzy @ July 13, 2005, 12:36)

lol, in that case, I might be able for something salacious for her to edit.

  QUOTE (columbus17 @ July 13, 2005, 12:40)

All you have to worry about when I edit it, is that sometimes "potman" might end up making love to someone other than the intended target,and perhaps in an orifice other than the intended one as well. It all hinges on the taste of the sandwich.

Okay, I submitted my drivel. I hope it's worthy of submission, and I hope that if so, it doesn't tax kbate's editorial prowess too much.

Oh yes! Airports and motels! Two new stories, with a "traveling theme.
You guys are good!

I didn't even chop yours, you must have submitted it with double spaced lines and triple spaced paragraphs since it maintained formatting.

well done columbus..

wow, a science major, now you are just too cool...

:0

I'll get these edited soon enough.


but not just this minute.

my half hour is up.

Armybody and prettyeyes37... I have replaced your stories with edited versions, please read and approve or disapprove. (if you disapprove, please gfy.... er I mean PM with the desired changes).

  QUOTE (kbateman @ August 30, 2005, 19:27)


gfy....uh...I mean ty.

I might as well go look at since you and I are the only 2 people to see it anyway.

Thank you KB....*smooch* on the cheek

Shit, now I need my thank you note edited.

  QUOTE (armybody @ August 31, 2005, 06:43)


I hope the new version is to your liking. I did not have to make many changes, mostly a few typos and some grammatic things, trying to keep the verb tense more consistant throughout the story and especially within sentences.

It's pretty good and gives me a look into the soldier's mind. (yuck).

Naughty,naughty I did actualy get a "kill" shot from <200 meters and >150 meters(exact is opsec).
However, I didn't ravage any peasant women. They kept our horny asses under lock and key

  QUOTE (armybody @ August 31, 2005, 10:29)


That a bad guy perished does not bother me overmuch and I hope you do not have to live with the memory long.

too bad, there are some hotties over there.

Absolutely hotties! I was amazed at the "average" looking Romanian woman, but then, being in the field can do that to a person.

We got 6 chaperoned hours at a resort town. I might as well have been Donald Trump! Every one of them little gymnastic models.

The beach was topless. They all have g-strings with the asses for it too.

At $1 to 29,000 Lei they wisely kept us under survelience. They all threw themselves at us everywhere we went.

That cold shower felt good.

Still waiting for yours chazzy!!!!!