POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
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POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
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January 22, 2005, 20:07 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
well i cant stand to see a thread go down in flames...
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January 25, 2005, 12:18 |
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January 25, 2005, 12:20 |
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I am not a pro my any means, but in my mind your poem was excelent, also liked how it ended the same as it started
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January 25, 2005, 16:37 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
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January 26, 2005, 10:03 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
Haiku is real fun
I like counting syllables
because it is cool.
this poem sucks dirt
I couldn't write a good one
if I tried right now
So this silly thread
can dissappear forever
and I shant miss it.
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January 26, 2005, 14:42 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
I say a gracious hello to you
Hear you like syllables too
Matching rhyming words include
Being in the perfect mood
If you are feeling sad and pale
I can blow some wind in your sail
If it happens to be your 28th day
All I can do is hope and pray
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January 26, 2005, 15:59 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
(chazzy, please delete this in a day). kb.
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January 26, 2005, 17:07 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
I would love so much for you to please tell me this did NOT really happen, KB
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January 27, 2005, 06:37 |
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Re: Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
QUOTE (kbateman @ January 26, 2005, 17:07)A day in the city, a day in the sun,
we were sharing our love and having some fun,
Shopping and eating, hand in hand on the mall,
Stood in the shadow, of the Vietnam wall,
Fifty thousand names, They fought and they died,
We stood by their monument, and I cried and cried.
She held my hand tightly and kissed my teary cheek,
My heart was uplifted, though my spirt was weak,
I heard a loud voice, evil words I wont say,
an angry man yelling, calling us gay ,
we turned and we looked, felt small and exposed,
Sensing our fear, he moved in and he posed,
Other people were watching, gleer in their eyes,
He insulted two girls and savored his prize,
speechlessly I stared, I had no idea what to do,
and Sarah was crying, what a pitiful two.
the first time I felt, the hatred and fear,
people who hate and the biggot they cheer.
It is bad, it has no meter, and it sucks
and if you don't like it fuck you, I don't care
right now.
(chazzy, please delete this in a day). kb.
I have no words to fix the hate and ignorance in our world. But your sadness is felt by all of us here who care for and respect you. Peace be with you my friend.
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January 27, 2005, 06:39 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
A new day has come and brought snow showers
What a difference a day makes 24 little hours
If I could make you shine, decorate you with flowers
Take back what people have said to hurt you
Show you our friendship is real and so true
But I cant do those things, I can only cry with you
People say things in heated bouts of blunder
How we react is what causes laughter or thunder
I want you to know we all love you here
And hope today will bring you some cheer
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January 27, 2005, 07:16 |
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jess8in2003
66 / male Gwinette/Walton Co., Georgia, US
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KB your heart is too beautiful
to be put through such pain.
Painful to observe, sad to see.
I would gladly take your hurt away,
if only it had been aimed not at you,
but at me.
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January 27, 2005, 21:24 |
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Re: Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
QUOTE (kbateman @ January 26, 2005, 14:42)Haiku is real fun
I like counting syllables
because it is cool.
this poem sucks dirt
I couldn't write a good one
if I tried right now
So this silly thread
can dissappear forever
and I shant miss it.
a perfectly sculpted seductress, dealing out death's burning kiss
assasin of the unfortunate thread, branding things unfit to be read
with your sharpened tongue and sass, never allowing the imperfect to pass
mesmerised by your infectious smile, i've been reading you for a while
but i am no thread, a man who stands instead
to chance your kiss of death, even if with my dieing breath
tasting your suptle lips, aroused by your sassy quips
alas this fantastical delight, happens only in dreams at night
tucked away tight in my bed, re-running words from a thread
kill them all every single one, living in a dream has lost its fun
longing for the war touch of skin, but you went and swore off men again.
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January 31, 2005, 10:19 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
Another year has past
Many taken a glance
No one taken a chance
I sit with pen and phone
No message or a tone
Older by only one year
What have I done wrong
Intimidate or cause fear
Have to sing a new song
Together with friendly cheer
If it seems to take to long
What the hell just another year
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January 31, 2005, 20:45 |
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
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February 17, 2005, 14:09 |
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Looking4Kink31
44 / male Mesquite, Texas, US
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Re: POEMS,,?,,,,,,,,Yes,,,,,,,,,Just POEMS
Breaking Point Rage once again takes a tight firm hold as my heightened anger begins to boil. My blood pressure increases; body shakes as though it were a tightly wound coil. My eyes see nothing but red flames and my toungue spews forth obscenities. I scream and let loose words so vulgar. My fists clench and I drop to my knees. I try to pray for God to somehow help, but my firey temper clouds my mind. I want to hurt or kill someone or thing, but my truest target I can never find. What can cool me down fast enough to allow the heavens time to annoint the steadfast spirit that I have within at the moment reaching breaking point.
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