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Midnight Stroll
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| June 4, 2008, 14:45 |
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Re: Midnight Stroll
I was going to express to NiceOgre I enjoyed reading his story, guess I'm not... Poofffff, he's gone! I didn't have a chance earlier, due to my Daisy (laptop) not feeling well the past 3-4 days.
tica... 
xox
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| June 7, 2008, 17:31 |
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NiceOgre71
53 / male
Middletown, Pennsylvania, US
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Re: Midnight Stroll
I'm back, sort of. I posted the same story over on another site where it got an overwhelming number of negative scores. I realize I'm not a great writer. That and the fact that I didn't get any responses to my profile led me to cancel my account. Thanks for the nice feedback, though. Glad at least one person liked it.
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| June 16, 2008, 11:22 |
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Re: Midnight Stroll
Happy to have you back with us....There's absolutely nothing wrong with your writing at all, I myself prefer your writing style well above all the so overdone flowery romance novel kind of erotic writing.
You quite clearly told a good story, an erotic story without the cheesy methods of describing every body part and biological physical functions with way over done descriptions (like....ya know....."her creamy vanilla bossom heaved with glistening dewey passion" ...that kinda stuff.)
I have ano appreciation for your kind of writing style.
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| June 16, 2008, 13:45 |
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NiceOgre71
53 / male
Middletown, Pennsylvania, US
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Re: Midnight Stroll
Thank you for the kind words. I wanted to stay away from the flowery words that are typically seen in stories. The reason being is that this is a 100% true account. I'm actually just returning from another midnight stroll (awesome, like last time), which is what reminded me of this site.
I actually created a profile, where I tried to attract a partner to accompany me on my little nighttime adventures, but received no interest. As a consider that possibility, of course I didn't receive any responses. What woman, in her right mind, would meet up with a complete stranger in a rural area in the dead of night??
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| June 20, 2008, 02:06 |
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Re: Midnight Stroll
You're right there, about a woman and a perfect stranger. You might find one, but...maybe it would be better to just find a woman, get to know each other and maybe she would share your fantasy in a more of a role playing way.
She may have a role play fantasy of her own she wants to share with you.
Allot of women are in to role playing about a stranger with someone they know...
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| June 20, 2008, 08:13 |
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